[it's fine because of the way that it is? totally fine.
anyway]
Maybe I thought of something very important just now.
[like "why does shinobu have your phone. don't give shinobu your phone. do you give your friends your phone? don't. your friends are fools, or shinobu, who will use my words against me."
a sudden thought grips him, darkening his frown. what if she looked at the photos? why had he ever agreed to be in any of his stupid food pictures. why did zenitsu have to like taking photos so much.
after another moment, he begrudgingly adds on:]
What do I have to do to make you return it to him.
no subject
anyway]
Maybe I thought of something very important just now.
[like "why does shinobu have your phone. don't give shinobu your phone. do you give your friends your phone? don't. your friends are fools, or shinobu, who will use my words against me."
a sudden thought grips him, darkening his frown. what if she looked at the photos? why had he ever agreed to be in any of his stupid food pictures. why did zenitsu have to like taking photos so much.
after another moment, he begrudgingly adds on:]
What do I have to do to make you return it to him.